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Review #29: Zac and Zelda

startri98

First Impression: cute cover!

I love the idea of telling the story through their letters, and you have great vocabulary/word choice. Your start is very captivating, and definitely hooks the reader on. What I'm confused by is why they are writing letters to each other, and why they are reminiscing about their past. Are they still together? Are these letters unsent letters? Maybe find a way to elaborate more on that. I like how the two characters have their own personality that fit together, and I like the way your story progresses. Great work!

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