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Review #27: The Wrongs He Made Right

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by bluecrayonlady

Dedicated to DarkWolf13

by bluecrayonlady

DarkWolf13

First Impression: cover is okay

Your start is pretty amazing. There are great descriptions and you do a great job conveying the emotions he feels, especially the battle that goes on in his head. You also have great characterization just through that first chapter. I think the plot of this is really cool, especially since I rarely see stories like this. I feel that the chapters are a little too long, especially since there is a lot of dialogue that is unnecessary and slows the story down. Otherwise, your grammar and spelling is flawless like always, so great job!

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady