Title: Written in dreams
Author: Fallingstars99
Review by: CriticG
Story:
For now,the story is good and the pace is good too.Sweet romance is something I don't enjoy,but this piece looks interesting and I'm looking forward to read more.
However,it is possible that the story might fall flat in the upcoming chapters because this story demands perfection.
The concept is good and if unnecessary attraction is added to the upcoming chapters,things can go wrong.
Rating: 8/10
characters:
6 chapters are not enough to judge the main characters,but the author has already managed to show us the different sides of Eleanor West.
Want to know more about Eleanor and other characters.
Rating: 10/10
Writing: Reread the chapters.
This is important for every writer.
Before posting the story,read the chapter slowly and you'll notice errors that can be eliminated.
Also,there are spacing issues.I'm okay with the paragraphs and all but we need spaces between the paragraphs here.
Spacing is an issue because the content looks stuffed rather than placed.
Give them some breathing space and it will look better.
Rating:8/10
Overall Rating: 8/10
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