Eyes within Silence by UnregardedIntellect.
Great job. You book is so intense, so serious, and so well written, it felt true.
I like how you have written the book, in bigger paragraphs and difficult words- it intensifies the scene giving it the desired effect.
It's a very good reason for people contemplating suicide, they will surely wish to find a purpose before their fatal flaw, unlike Kyle.
I liked the way you described Kyle, and the scene two.
I just want to Say great great job.
Keep writing.
With loads of love
Aisha.
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