Book title :- Rat And Juliet
Author :- cchinu
Reviewer :- resplend
↪ Book title
The title quite matches well with what you've written. No need to make any changes!
▶ Rating :- 05/05
↪ Book cover
The cover of your book is very simple. It would be great if you could find a better one! You can request a cover from Arats Covers Shop!
▶ Rating :- 01/05
↪ Content
Your poems ? Your poems are fantastic I guess! Kinda heart breaking poems. They're interesting! I loved them.
Your words contain a deep meaning and they're with great amount of feelings and emotions embedded in them. I seriously loved the chemistry of Rat and Juliet in a cute poetic way! Poor rat!! Hehe.
▶ Rating :- 05/05
↪ Corrections
1) Try to write your poems in Italics too!
↪ Tips
1) Rhyming makes a poem shine! I'd suggest you to try some rhyming patterns. It is hard but then too you can give it a try!
2) You can use thesaurus because it can help you out with synonyms and some poetic words.
▶ Overall rating :- 04/05
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That's all! I hope you'll keep these things in mind and I really hope that they will help you further with your writings.
I sincerely wanted to help you, I hope you didnt feel bad about anything and if you felt then I am extremely sorry!
Keep writing! Your poems are good.
All the best!
-Ira♥
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