Book title :- A Bleeding Heart
Author iHeartUwthAllmyheart
Reviewer :- resplend
↪ Book title
I think the title of your book is perfect. No changes needed!
▶ Rating :- 05/05
↪ Book cover
Book cover is perfect, but you can change if you find a better one. You can request a cover from Arats Covers Shop!
▶ Rating :- 3.5/05
↪ Content
Poems are short and sweet! I loved them. They're short with a deep meaning. Feelings and emotions of an abandoned heart are described beautifully!
Out of five, I loved the first and second but there were certain errors which I would like to point out!
▶ Rating :- 04/05
↪ Corrections
1) Among the broken promises,as shattered as they can be.
Among the broken promises,
As shattered as they can be.
2) Use a comma in a line and then a full stop in the other one! Use a new line for a new sentence.
↪ Tips
1) Rhyming makes a poem twinkle like a star. Practice some rhyming patterns! Try to work on rhyme schemes. It's hard but then too give it a try!
2) Try to use words that are little hard and fit perfectly in a line. I'd suggest you to use a thesaurus for this because it can help you out with synonyms.
Example :- If you're using the word 'graceful', you can use 'elegant' in its place.
3) After writing always reread your poems!
▶ Overall rating :- 04/05
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That's all! I hope you'll keep these things in mind and I also hope that they will surely help you further with your writings!
You can contact me if you need any kind of help!
Keep writing!
All the very best!
-Ira♥
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