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Author- TheMatchmakerMandM

Reviewer- fallingstars99

Cover-

It's good but PLEASE CHANGE IT. It doesn't justify with the amazing content you have! It should link to the story well.
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Rating- 2/5

Title-

Perfect. It is the main content of the story.

Rating- 5/5

Preface-

Again perfect. It creates mystery as well as gives required info.

Rating-5/5

My POV -

First of all, miss author,

Nice to meet you ,
Where you been?
Your story showed me incredible things 😂
Magic madness heaven sins..

It's full package of them!!

You get the idea?? Your story is beyond amazing

Normally people don't wanna get review by me, because I find too many mistakes, but it was the first time I've to struggle to point out any thing.

It's perfect! The story which starts showing a normal senior girl and a new school boy and well, the ending....oh my goodness.. You have a serious talent.

I like the humor here and there, your grammar is perfect, your use of tense is perfect, everything is just up to mark. You have got a fan girl now, lol.

Overall Rating- 4/5

Suggestions-

I really don't have any major ones but it's out of habit 😛

1) I've pointed this many times, when you end your sentence with '?' Or '!' You use comma after that too which is wrong.

Ex- "What do you mean?," ❌

It should be like

"What do you mean?" He asked ✅

2) some inverted commas and periods are missing, there are some typos but well, nothing that couldn't be fixed in one go.

3) change your cover if possible please.

4) I don't say it often but, you and your book NEED to be recognized, so I suggest you to join book clubs. Start from joining our's 😛

Your story is just on brink of complete perfection, don't stop writing the sequel and get some time to edit this too!

All the best ♥

Love,
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