review by themissperfect

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Nimi1D- To young to care.

It's amazing! It has perfectly written paragraphs and very well spaced too.

The best part is, the story is extremely relatable, many people feel the same about school, drool on seniors and stuff 😉.

Also, the title, it's extremely catchy, it seems like it's going on be some adventure or wild book, but it's written so well that it catches in surprise and keeps us gripped.

I loved the book, and I am sure, it's going to be extremely popular.

One thing, I need to point out is, there are a few small grammatical and spelling mistakes, which you can solve, in just one reading. I understand, that English is not your first language, so I would suggest, may be after you write the chapter, you read it aloud; you will get what might be small problems.

I hope I didn't offend you. And your book is seriously awesome! Keep updating sweets.

Lots of love
Aisha.

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