Review by : _boho_chick_
For: DJRemix13
Title: The Forgotten Island: When Boys Cry
I think the title is great. The addition 'When Boys Cry' is really impactful.
Description: The description is really nice. Maybe adding an excerpt from the book would make it better. But its very interesting. Good.
Cover: Dude, you need a better cover to show the wholesome goodness inside. Like, really.
View: The book has an impressive start. There is just a hint of pain beneath the words in the beginning, which I really really like.
The protagonist's feelings are described very well. The whole confusion, the love, the gloom, everything.
I think your writing style is very good.
Maybe you need to work on your grammar a bit, the spacing is good, but you need to look at the punctuation.
I don't know how to criticise you, your book is good, very good.
Hope I could help.
Love,
Stuti.
YOU ARE READING
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