DustinRiley1- LONG ROAD HOME
It was a pleasure reading your book.
Long road home, the name felt like it provoked the readers to explore; in other words ; I loved the title.
You are a published author, so while I expected nothing less, I am still shocked with the amount of thought put in this literary piece.
-Plot: it was awesome, its a work of adventure and scifi. I liked how you have explained why the apocalypse happened, and about all the ways common household goods were so useful. It seemed like a very time -consuming task. But It was done extremely well.
-Cover: you could do with a better one, I mean, it suits the title, but if it had been showing apocalypse, or something involving more action- I am sure you will get more reads.
-Writing style: you have an excellent way with words. Punctuations are correct almost everywhere, except may be a few lines, but then when you'll edit the typos, it will be rectified. I like the way you have kept the paragraphs short and understandable.
I like your book a lot and hope to read more of your amazing work; keep updating.
Lots of love
Aisha
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