Dedicated @SharkBaitH00HaHa
Plot and Idea: 1D fanfic
Summary: Sneak peek at Saving Grace, a story that I'll be writing in 2015!
Ambriel is an angel who's job is to protect five boys. Niall Horan, Liam Payne, Harry Styles, Louis Tomlinson, and Zayn Malik. These boys put Ambriel through the works every day, but they don't know it. Until now.
Tired of hiding, Ambriel reveals herself to them when these boys face near death experiences including getting mugged, being hit by a car, and yes, choking on a blue raspberry Dum Dum. The boys are left to wonder who this mystery guardian girl is and why they find a feather once she's gone again.
(A/N: This does reference some characters from the show Supernatural but this is a One Direction fan fiction)
My Review: So you have good grammer, good spacing but fix your paragrahing. I also recommend on you making it more understandable for your readers. Nothing much needs to be done, your plot is good and interesting but make it clearer.
Rating: 8
Overall: This book keeps people interested
