Dedicatd to @lirrysfloss for witing thiis story.
Plot and Idea: Courageous
Summary: {1}❝in which he loves her and she leaves him with his new best friend whiskey.❞
-heartbroken series
My Review: The story is written in third-person most of the time i believe (correct me if i'm wrong). I can see what you wanted the story to speak about but it was slightly confusing, try clearing up your point better. Thee spacing is fine, the punctuation is mostly there, and so is your grammer.
Rating: 7
Overall: I'd suggest it to 1D fans