@TheCrystalBlue
Plot and Idea: Weird
Genre: Humor
Summary:
I have created a new world!!! I call it Inarnia... here you will get all the Inarnian news and stuff... We have all kinds of animals here!!! Unicorns, pegasi, alicorns...you get the point, Inarnia is awesome!!! So please read now... NOW LIKE RIGHT NOW!!!
Also, it's now a Randomness book!
EXCLUSIVE! Inarnia is beautiful, yes. But the... Randomness of it's people is amazing. We, the Inarnians, are here to make you laugh and... Other stuff... But, yeah, it's mainly to make you laugh. Look, sometimes you just need to express yourself, and mine is sarcasm and dry humour. I'm WAY better at it than Coffee( My in-the-head friend.)
Coffee: IN YOUR DAYDREAMS, INARA!
Me: WE ARE IN MY DAYDREAMS, COFFEE!
Coffee The Sarcasm Queen: WHO THE HELL CARES?
Inara, The Ultimate Queen of Awesomeness including sarcasm, dry humour, etc. :I DO!
Anyway, what're you waiting for? This is your chance!
My Review: For one I'd get a new cover. The stories quite strange and I'm not sure we can even call it a story really. The story seems to fit more of a club setting on wattpad, but not a story. It's weird, but you interact well with the readers. I'd suggest, making this into a club, but it is not a story. The capitalization needs work and so does your grammar and sometimes punctuation. The paragraphing and spacing is off a lot. I found the sentences with dialogue to be not properly structured whatsoever. So, I can't judge on much from this... story?, but it does need work, if you care about the grammar, spacing, paragraphing and capitalization in the book.
Rating: 6.7
Overall: I'd do a whole bunch of editing, but as far as reader/writer interaction you seem to be doing fine.
