Dedicated to @JessandRich
Plot and Idea: same as before
Summary: After they broke up, Danielle was Torn. And Liam was apart from her. Now even more apart ever since he started dating Sophia. Danielle moved on, and so did Liam. Then, they were reunited. Well that's all I got. I don't want to spoil it so just read the book! GOSH! People these days. Copyright ©
My Review: Ok, so the summary is better. You need to have something besides said it gets repetitive, the capitalization needs some help, you need commas, you missing periods. Your transitions aren't clean either. I can see very little change but it's getting better.
Rating: 5.3
Overall: I think it still needs help
