Ddeicated to @xMissyCurlyx for making the story.
Plot & Idea: Imanginative
Summary: Hiiiiiiii
I found you on that 1d thing on kik. I'm a guy directioner." This message turned Gem's life upside down. She had no idea who that person was, she just added him on her 'Internet Directiones' friend list. She used to fangirl with him, share her crazy dreams with him and told him about her truly deeply madly enthusiasm to marry Harry Styles. Most importantly, she was herself. Later did she know, he was not just a guy directioner.He was more, he was the love of her life. Copyright © 2014 xMissyCurlyx Cover made by @pepperrmint
My Review: Ok um... the first chapter just felt random, check some grammer points in your story. I can't see where the story is going, like the story plot is fuzzy, things happened weirdly and way to quickly. As the story progressed it slowed down and the plot is settling in, I can see things improving but check that grammer. The spacing was also good.
Rating: 7.5
Overall: Its not bad, keep working hard
