Virus 2.0

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Dedicated @MapleLeafx

Plot and Idea: Hmm


Genre: Fanfiction


Summary: A dangerous virus has gone global, infecting anyone it comes in contact with. It makes the person go insane, think differently, become dangerous.

Amber Spence was a survivor, living in the safe zone for months. But when supplies start running out, Amber and her friends are forced to go out and find more material. But on Amber's agenda, there's more then one thing she needs to do. And it might just cost her her life, or her sanity. Cover by harryjustwokeup


My Review: I love your story; it was really interesting and I couldn't stop reading. This is a really well written story, though there are some grammar issues here and there (not incorrectly spelled, just wrong context). I loved the character development and your pace was great. You have very good description as well as spacing and paragraphing. I would go on more, but there's nothing to criticize on apart from the grammar I touched on. I for one will be waiting for an update for this story.


Rating: 10


Overall: Wonderful read


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