Dedicated @johnesiaswinton
Plot and Idea: Unusual
Summary: You would think that if one direction were going to adopt a child it would be a girl. You thought wrong. One direction adopted a boy and boy oh boy will it be a hand full. Will the directioners like him? Will even one direction like them?!
My Review: The beginning made me so sad, but I just want you to work on your punctuation. Check the spelling as well there are a few issues with it. The spacing is ok though you need to fix when your characters speak, they cannot have two people speaking in one paragraph. There is also the problem of you switching to past and present tense, the trick is to do it slowly and gradually not to confuse the readers. And you have to capitalize names of people. Anyway just take these criticism's for your book and try to fix them.
Rating: 7
Overall: I would read this story if the little kinks were fixed.
