Dedicated to @SkyDancer14
Plot & Idea: Could be better
Summary: A young group of friends who live out on the woods have a special secret. They can all shift into animals. Although Kitara has a rather special ability all her own. Also, when Kitara meets another young person with a talent very different from her own. Many secrets are laird bare, many loyalties tested, and many new alliances are formed.
(Im really bad at descriptions and i'm kinda making it up as I go so this may not be totally accurate. Thanks for reading!)
My Review: Ok, so this is good but check for words that are not there. I noticed this in the first chapter so you should check that. But your spacing is fine and the words you didn't forget are correctly spelled. The paragraphing is good and your plot keeps my interest. Keep it up, but check that grammar a bit.
Rating: 8
Overall: Its good, some things need work but it's good
