Dedicated to awesomeswaggie13 for writing the book
Plot & Idea: Cute, Love the idea
Summary: Beautiful Talented singers combined into one girl group named 5 Notes was already superb. They were famous group just like 1D. When both groups were assigned to form a mega super song,5N promised each other to stand by their code. Not to fall for boyband code. 5N were formed by 5 talented girls,Ash,Amelia,Ella,Artemis and Bethany. Things change until one of 1D and 5N falls for each other.
My Review: I like the characters they seem really interesting. Though there is nothing majorly wrong there are grammer issues, I'm sure if you reread it you'll see what has to be changed. Other than that there is not lots of punctuation as far as I can see. The hook could be stronger. But other than those tid bits nothings wronge as far as i can see.
Rating: 5.2
Overall: I think as the story progresses your writing will become better and capture more interest. Keep up the good work.
This book has 5 chapters
