Plot and Idea: Seems used
Genre: Mystery/ Thriller
Summary:
Rebecca Singfield, 26 year old from Miami, has always had a very difficult life, from an abusive father and thousands of foster homes. So when the BAU, or behavioral analysis unit, recruits her as a new agent she becomes more nervous then excited, and her life quickly turns into a game of love, pain, and torture.
~I DO NOT OWN THE SHOW CRIMINAL MINDS OR ANY CHARECTER FROM THE SHOW ON CBS~
My Review: First things first you have a cover that needs help. Alright so you need help with capitalization and punctuation. The grammar is not majorly flawed, but the structure is not very good in the story. I wish there was more description and character development in the story. Your tense is quite wonky and the flow isn't quite good, although you have good paragraphing, it gets wonky when reaching dialogue. You're dialogue is a bit confusing and sloppy, but you have the correct spacing when it doesn't involve dialogue. I would like to give you a tip for dialogue: do not have two characters speaking in the same paragraph.
Rating: 4
Overall: Needs much help, but not impossible to improve
