Dedicated to @katiecat746 who wrote the story.
Plot & Idea: Capturing
Summary: Gillian Travers is an average girl attending The London College of Music for her music degree. You could say her life is perfect, except for the fact that she lives with her abusive uncle/godfather, whom is paying for her education. After her time in school is over, Gillian finally has enough and escapes from her torturers clutches, only to find herself alone and helpless. Soon she is rescued by a sweet and kind member of her favorite boyband, One Direction. Once she finds out who he is and that his band mate is her long lost cousin, Gillian's life is turned upside down as she moves in with the lads and discovers her feelings for a certain Doncaster boy in this twisting tale of adventure and romance.
My Review: I love the concept, though it moves kind of fast slow it down keep it steady not to much the readers. You don't want things to jumble in their heads keep it slow and steady and when those shocking things happen it will capture your readers. Other than slowing down your spacing seems fine, the grammar is okay, and your punctuation is cool.
Rating: 6.7
Overall: I think you can improve but you are doing a good job.
This story has 9 chapters
