Dedicated to @JustBeautifulgirl for writing the book
Plot&Idea: Sounds Original
Genre: Teen Fiction
Summary: He broke her heart. Her mama died. She had to go live with the man who left her. Her dad. Blaire's mama died. Her best friend broke her heart. She's 16 and therefore has to live with...her dad. Her dad has remarried into a rich family. There is Ali and Rush. Rush is a jackass and a player. He meets Blaire. He's jealous that her dad cares more for her than him. This is a book filled with Jealously, anger, and maybe Love?
My Review: I like the idea though it needs editing, It gets slightly confusing. The punctuation needs some help. Your grammar is fine from what I've read so far. But you don't need to say things such as 'He walks in' you can make the characters interact and give it more of a story vibe and not a narrator vibe. Try writing some past tense action words instead of present tense. Also separate your dialogue when different people are speaking. Lastly check on your cover.
Rating: 5.4
Overall: Needs some work but could be really good if properly edited
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