Dedicated to @RasyiqahM for writing this story.
Plot and Idea: Nice
Summary: Meet Layla
She is a model,a dancer,a singer and an actress. She is 14 and did I mention that she is Louis Tomlinson Daughter? She have some problems with herself. Always the same old smile,Always the same old lie What happen when that she found that her mother is actually her step mother? What happen if that she has a crush on her brother best friend What happen if she met her biological motther? Find Out in Louis Daughter Song for the chapter:She will be loved by Maroon 5
My Review: Alright I see the idea but check your summary, read it and you'll see what needs to be corrected. You have grammer issues from what i can see. The chpaters are short but that doesn't always matter but since it is people will notice the mistakes more. Re-read your book and do the editing needed. Though you have the proper punctuation but some of the spacing needs to be corrected. So re-read it then do the editing needed then check it over.
Rating: 5.7 (the editing and spacing needed)
Overall: If edited could be really good
