Plot and Idea: Seen before
Genre: Random
Summary:
"I can't believe I would've let it get this far. He's always been abusive; I just didn't think he would go this low to hurt me."Follow Andy's remarkable journey as she leaves her abusive boyfriend to start a new life that doesn't involve living in fear.
My Review: So the flow of your story is okay it doesn't go too fast. You have good grammar and spacing and paragraphing. Nothing is really wrong with the story, I just wish you made the chapters a little longer, you have good description, but lengthening it would definitely help in making your chapters longer. Your tense is correct and so is everything else, but I wish we knew more about your main character, so we could relate a bit better. From what I've read so far, you seem to have loyal readers and your story keeps them interested. I hope you stay original and don't fall into step with every other abuse story.
Rating: 9.8
Overall: It is a good story
