Plot and Idea: Tragic
Genre: Fanfiction
Summary: After an amazing day together, Percy and Annabeth are caught in a horrific car crash. How will it effect everyone they hold dear to them, including each other?
My Review: The cover of your book is alright, although it doesn't seem to attract much attention from potential readers. The description you use in your story is wonderful, just as well as your pace. The grammar though, could use a little work and the punctuation could be better at times. Though your paragraphing and spacing seem to be good, the sentence structure can be a little iffy at times for you, but it is mainly due to your punctuation errors.
Though there are some obvious errors in your story at times, the capitalization is pretty good and your stories pace is nice. Your development of the characters, as well as how they develop is nice and easily understood. The storyline is wonderful and your dialogue is easy to follow and keeps the story feeling lighthearted when it needs to be and tragic/dramatic when it needs to be.
Rating: 9.8
Overall: Great story, few kinks that can easily be fixed.
