Plot and Idea: Intriguing
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Queen Madison was always loyal to her country. She was the model, the perfect example of loyalty and leadership. But when she is accused of treason, her world is flipped upside down and inside out.
My Review: This story seems to only have one chapter at the moment, but you seem to have a great storyline going already. The pace and tense are pretty well written and really good for your story. The description, all though very little was still very good and you had great use of punctuation.
The dialogue between your characters really drew me in as a reader. The development cannot be seen yet since it is the first chapter, but your main character is a great lead. The grammar and spacing is wonder, just like your capitalization. The sentence structure and paragraphing seem to be good as well. Lastly, your cover needs a little work in order to capture readers attentions.
Rating: 9.7
Overall: Wonderful start to a book.
