Dedicated @Double_AA
Plot and Idea: Good
Summary: "I said that I would save you. And I did."
It's not her fault. She didn't know. She didn't know who he was. She didn't know what he was. Okay . . . Maybe she did. But still. She didn't know that when he promised he could save her, what he meant. She didn't know what being 'saved' meant. She didn't know that out of her own free will she single handedly ruined her own life. It's not her fault. She didn't know.
My Review: I enjoyed your book, just chapter 4, page one, at the bottom was slightly confusing. Maybe clear that up a bit, but your grammer is good, so is your punctuation. Your pacing seems alright as well. I don't see spelling errors and I liked the pace of the story. Though there is always room to improve keep writing.
Rating: 9.5
Overall: I like your story so far keep it up
