Plot and Idea: Cute and simple
Genre: Romance
Summary: A story about a girl who can't talk and a boy who becomes captivated by her beauty and her silence.
My Review: The beginning of your story is very interesting and you described your character very nicely so that your readers are able to picture her, but I'd take a look at where you're placing your punctuation. Your sentences seem a bit chopped off; it feels as if you haven't finished your thought before jumping into another. I'd like you to take a look at your first chapter when your two main characters are in the car you say 'kiss to my kiss' so I believe you meant 'kiss to my lips'. Check your capitalization from time to time (chapter 2 mainly).
I'd like to complement you on your grammar though, it seems that you have no mistakes in spelling, but make sure you stick to your point of you. When switching your tenses it doesn't seem too bad, but make sure it doesn't go overboard. The flow of your story is very nice and doesn't rush the readers through anything, but check that paragraphing a bit. Your spacing seems pretty good and so does the characterization, just help them grow as the story continues, so that it doesn't feel stuck.
The length of your story is pretty nice and the chapters don't seem too long or too short. Overall, your story is very good and the issues are really minor and sometimes not really noticeable which is good. I would recommend some reviewing and editing so that you can truly get the story a way that can attracts others.
Rating: 9
Overall: This is a great romance, that's very cute and simple.
