Dedicated @ Jayfeather185
Plot and Idea: Attention grabbing
Summary: color: (n.) a phenomenon of light (as red, brown, pink, or gray) or
visual perception that enables one to differentiate otherwise identical objects
Sky Williams lives in a world of monochrome. Yep, he’s color blind, not
that it really matters to him. His mom has finally decided that he should “socialize”
and go to public school. However, he thinks he’s perfectly fine being
homeschooled and watching Netflix. Who needs friends?
Call Simon used to be the perfect kid. Of course, he’s still got the
perfect grades and he’s still the leader of the debate team, but something else
has changed. He ignores everyone. Well, until he meets Sky.
It all started with a question: “Do you want a peppermint?”
Sometimes seeing the world without color is better, but it all depends
on what you see.
My Review: So work on your capitalization a little bit some of the words that need to be capitalized aren't. The prologue is slightly confusing, maybe read it and clear it up a bit; though once you reach chapter to things begin to make sense. I suggest when you do a transition have a seperation so the reader knows as well and its not just jumping for thing to thing. Also check chapter four some of your words are mispelled.
Rating: 7
Overall: Its ok but can be really good with some help
