Dedicated @BethFirmin
Plot and Idea: Sad; Not usually done
Summary: When Alice's ex-best friend, outcast Nicole, commits suicide, Alice tries to tell herself that she is not to blame and that she doesn't care that Nicole is gone. But Alice cannot escape the guilt she feels about the fact that her own best friends were Nicole's main tormentors. Overwhelmed with her conflicting emotions, Alice tries to forget about Nicole and the events leading to her suicide. Then the ghost arrives. And the ghost won't let Alice forget.
My Review: So, as soon as i started the book i immediately noticed the spacing was off. Maybe have the way Alice finds out different. The story seems to need revision. Maybe you should have saved what happened between Nicole and Alice for later into the story, and the reason why they were no longer friends could have been bigger. The story sort of trails off on occasion, but it happens to many authors. You should edit the story a bit, but i think if it gets proper spacing and editing it could be really good.
Rating: 6.5
Overall: It needs some editing but could be good
